Thanks for reading Albert! Mme is the abbreviation for Madame (with M as Monsieur), often used in classic French stories! Sorry if it was confusing ha!
You've weaved such powerful visuals for this! But I found the narrative got a little lost. I found it a bit difficult to follow the chain of events, especially what happened with Mme. Lamontagne
Yes I think it was a bit unclear, reading it back! I think I needed to re-centre the action a little bit! Thanks for the feedback and for reading as always!
What is mme? I’ve never heard of this word. Other than that, quite enjoyable piece
Thanks for reading Albert! Mme is the abbreviation for Madame (with M as Monsieur), often used in classic French stories! Sorry if it was confusing ha!
You've weaved such powerful visuals for this! But I found the narrative got a little lost. I found it a bit difficult to follow the chain of events, especially what happened with Mme. Lamontagne
Yes I think it was a bit unclear, reading it back! I think I needed to re-centre the action a little bit! Thanks for the feedback and for reading as always!